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War!
May 17, 2008 2:07:33 GMT -5
Post by Moldy Cheese on May 17, 2008 2:07:33 GMT -5
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War!
May 17, 2008 12:36:20 GMT -5
Post by gray929 on May 17, 2008 12:36:20 GMT -5
I like this a lot. A few comments. - First, I'd make the Hello Jarvis sticker bigger. - Next, maybe add a tank the same style as the missiles to the bottom of the hat. - Last, the "war" text is bothering me a bit. It still is pretty cool, but first, I would change the angle. Have it standing upright or close to the upright position. Then, maybe add a camo gradient to the text and see how that looks. Make it a lighter shade of camo though and keep it that same style. Reason is, I think there are too many different ranges of colors. You have green, red, and the peach hues. Makes the "war: text out of place some. Great job though, glad to see you designing! It makes me happy
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