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Post by gray929 on Feb 24, 2008 22:27:49 GMT -5
C + C = Mucho appreciated. Not perfect I know. Give me suggestions! here |
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Zac Attack
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Post by Zac Attack on Mar 5, 2008 18:55:13 GMT -5
Well, to be honest, the yellow clashed with the grass and makes it look unrealistic....
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Post by gray929 on Mar 5, 2008 21:53:16 GMT -5
The street line or the grass?
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Post by Zac Attack on Mar 6, 2008 21:02:17 GMT -5
The line I guess  |
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Post by Schubaltz on Mar 6, 2008 23:10:32 GMT -5
Eh, the lane marker looks more like two stretched ribbons than it does yellow grass. And the blackening of the image between the second and third wooden dividers is too suddle to have any effect (other than to seem like you forgot to color something somewhere).  |
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Post by Stinky666 on Mar 7, 2008 5:02:51 GMT -5
I don't "get" the woman just being there. She looks randomly placed in, to give the effect that you have put more into it than just the grass etc. If that makes any sense to you...  I like the idea tbh, I think.. lol The sky in the last (furthest away) gate way thingy majiggy, is black, where as the other sky is blue...  |
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Post by gray929 on Mar 7, 2008 21:27:16 GMT -5
I was trying to make it seem like a person walking through different worlds, sort of caught up in emotions and I failed. xD Thanks for the critiques guys.
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