Simply Amor
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Post by Simply Amor on Dec 12, 2007 14:34:17 GMT -5
Haven't made anything in awhile. Critique and tips on how to make it better are much appreciated. I've never been too good with sigs, heh. update:
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Post by Soul Glow Activature on Dec 12, 2007 14:57:26 GMT -5
i have seen you do better, but ti is a good atempt. maybe try some more contrast, and sharpen it a little, it is really dark.
i give it a 6.5/10
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Simply Amor
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Post by Simply Amor on Dec 12, 2007 15:18:06 GMT -5
thanks sonny i'll work on it edit: it's been updated.
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Kahless
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Post by Kahless on Dec 13, 2007 0:37:23 GMT -5
Nice, I like the colors on it, but maybe make the stock flash out more or something? seems a little to embedded to me, also maybe make the text a little more dominant?
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Post by Soul Glow Activature on Dec 13, 2007 18:03:10 GMT -5
alot better amor! looks great, we to turn it around.
but yeah like Moldy Cheese said, stock and font still need to stand out a little more. espically the text, not so much the stock.
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Post by Blink on Dec 13, 2007 19:48:32 GMT -5
Love it. Great blending and brushes etc. I like the color of the first one better.
Only problem is I didn't even notice the text 'till I read the other replies.
And the stock is fine, don't listen to them.
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Simply Amor
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Post by Simply Amor on Dec 13, 2007 19:50:08 GMT -5
I don't like making my text noticable xD it always seems to take away the focus whenever i make the text readable, heh.
but i'll work on it some.
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Post by Soul Glow Activature on Dec 13, 2007 20:58:50 GMT -5
well i mean what is the point of text then?
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Simply Amor
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Post by Simply Amor on Dec 13, 2007 21:19:43 GMT -5
practice. it's something to be able to do, just i don't like making it noticeable because of the reason i said before. it takes my focus away, every single time. oddly, only on sigs that i'm making for no reason is when that happens lol
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Post by Soul Glow Activature on Dec 13, 2007 21:21:25 GMT -5
haha i see, well looks great, i like the light on the left side. again nice work.
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Simply Amor
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Post by Simply Amor on Dec 13, 2007 21:24:13 GMT -5
thanks, sonny.
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Post by Arucard on Dec 13, 2007 21:41:14 GMT -5
Very nice Amor, i like the second alot better being light colors. For the text you could alway add little bit to each time so that the text is little bit more noticeable. i say a smuge more and the text would be fine by me.
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