00ki3
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Post by 00ki3 on Dec 5, 2007 3:25:48 GMT -5
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Simply Amor
Pro Member 
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Post by Simply Amor on Dec 5, 2007 12:47:54 GMT -5
You need to tighten up your focal more. My eye gets drawn to the smoke behind the car. The animation is ok. I think i should be something other then white. That might help with the focal some.
The blending of the car could be a little better too... try blurring the edges some to blend into the BG some.
Overall.. it's not a bad sig. I'd say pick more colors from the render itself and use those to make your BG and such so it flows more.
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mujinrecca
Full Member 
I was a creature before i was a man
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Post by mujinrecca on Dec 5, 2007 13:33:49 GMT -5
well the animation is good, just the text is a little to "choppy"
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Post by Soul Glow Activature on Dec 5, 2007 16:06:03 GMT -5
looks good. i think it would be cool if you smudged out the back of the car towards the corner, with a sharp smudge. but good work, animation looks nice. i should probably learn how to sue those soon.
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Rockafeller
Graphics Moderator 
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Post by Rockafeller on Dec 5, 2007 16:34:56 GMT -5
Seriously bad font for the sig along with the color. you have more dark colors than bright i would extremely recommend black text on smooth.
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