Simply Amor
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I am currently making the forum for my fan club :o
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Post by Simply Amor on Nov 15, 2007 19:32:57 GMT -5
  I know it says "Morelle" on them... That's my name on ProVision lol. Anyway, please helpful tips/criticism on these... I want to improve. |
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Post by Soul Glow Activature on Nov 15, 2007 20:37:41 GMT -5
wowo that looks awsome! the rander could stand out a little but more, and same tieh the text in the sig, but other than that looks great. avy is exalent. nice work.
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Post by Sanus Compleo on Nov 16, 2007 4:48:40 GMT -5
Very good, although it seems that your focal point is to the left of the render, in that abstract area. Excellent lighting effects, although it doesn't seem to have any particular flow to it. Very good text, it fits nicely. The color is actually a bit intrusive, but it fits well in the way used here. I get a very surreal sense when I see this. Great job!
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teg
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I will keep you waiting.
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Post by teg on Nov 16, 2007 4:49:21 GMT -5
Not bad I like your style. What is that a stock of?
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Post by Sanus Compleo on Nov 16, 2007 4:57:48 GMT -5
A motorcycle.  |
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Simply Amor
Pro Member
I am currently making the forum for my fan club :o
Posts: 503
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Post by Simply Amor on Nov 16, 2007 12:40:48 GMT -5
Thank you everyone for your comments. Yes the focal is a bit off, I will tighten that up in my next sig. Same for text color/effects. Me thinsk I will work on another soon... Thanks again!  |
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