teg
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Post by teg on Nov 11, 2007 19:15:41 GMT -5
from me anyway... original  take 2  Take 3  Take 4  critique |
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Post by Soul Glow Activature on Nov 11, 2007 20:54:17 GMT -5
looks really good i like it, i just dont know what that is a picture of? hahah other than that looks good. i like the second one the best.
to much black in the first.
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teg
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Post by teg on Nov 11, 2007 21:18:21 GMT -5
here are the other two takes... Take 3 Take 4 |
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Stinky666
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Post by Stinky666 on Nov 11, 2007 22:43:56 GMT -5
Third gmv, just add that bit in from the 4th one, on the left side. I dunno what it is part of, its the bendy thing, goes from the center and then touches the border.
The first, 2nd & 3rd have more of a focal and isn't making you look all around the piece, the eyes stay focused on one spot.
The second one does the complete opposite to that.
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Post by Soul Glow Activature on Nov 12, 2007 12:55:48 GMT -5
i still ike teh second one the best.
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Post by Blink on Nov 12, 2007 14:44:01 GMT -5
Is that a stock or did you make the whole thing? I can't give an accurate rate without knowing.
Great blending and brushwork. Font fits in nicely. It's well balanced as well.
I like the fourth one best.
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teg
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Post by teg on Nov 12, 2007 20:59:35 GMT -5
It's a stock image/render thingy.
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