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[teg]

Thought I'd give it a try for the first time in like 4 or 5 months now...

[Beeeeeel]

It's alright.

Firstly, I'd add some more colors to it. Even if they aren't what the stock originally looked like, add some different shades to it, nothing too contrasting though. Some greens, shades of yellow, maybe orange.

The left side and the right side should balance more. You have loads going on on the right, but there is just text on the left. Add some brushing under it, or some effect/pattern/whatever you want to try out.

The rest of the piece seems sufficient enough, I suppose. I don't know if I really like the piece that much, though. My first impression was just that it was kinda boring and dull.

Oh, and I think the text sticks out too much. I'd notch down the opacity a bit.


Good luck.

[Arucard]

This looks nice, i also think add some more color to it and the left does need more balance to it other than that i think it looks good.