3 Of my Signatures

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Jessica Alba



Lindsay Lohan



Disturbed



Well comments and suggestions are welcome and appreciated.

[Stinky666]

Third is the best of these.
One thing I notice with each, is that you seem to like putting effects over the stocks face, which in my opinion, is a bad thing, unless done very well, and in these cases are not.
Try not to have scan lines set too high in opacity, 'cos in my opinion, scan lines can ruin tags, especially when you have scan lines in a lot of places on a tag.

[Soul Glow Activature]

i like the second one the best, cool design and lighting, plus that is a really hot pictur of Lindsy hahah

in the third one the thing over the girls face is to destracting.

like MW said try to avoid putting things over their face.

[Beeeeeel]

Distortion of a focal point can be crippling to a piece. I think it was a bad idea on these ones.


Number one seems a bit too plain to me. The text is almost obsolete because the lighting is in that area and overpowers it.

The extrude (I'd assume it is) going over her face isn't that great of an idea. I'd remove that. In fact, I don't like it on the piece at all... I don't know, up to you.


On number two, the lighting is too close to the stock and draws attention away from it (of course, given that the majority of people who will rate your pieces is going to be guys, I doubt they'd take their eyes off =P). I don't think the style of the piece works with the piece itself. It's like you're trying to incorporate a picture of a famous person with a techy design, which I don't get. Oh well, again, up to you.

Nice blending though, and I like the border.


Text on the third one is poorly done. I think the text as a whole should be removed or a more suitable font should be found.

The stock is way too distorted, I don't think that's a good thing. Take all of the excess stuff off that and it'd be a much better piece. I think the reason you did that is because the piece is called "disturbed", but I think the piece should have no name and the style of it should be changed.



I suppose that's all. Nicely done pieces, I remember rating at least the third one on G101 ages ago.

Keep up the good work. =)

[Stinky666]

I just thought, with that third tag, you could maybe turn that piece on her face, into a bit that looks like it is peeling away from her face. And possible desaturate that part..

This part: (the circled bit lol)

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The stock in the third one is suppose to be distorted like that hence the name of the signature... Disturbed lol....

but i do over use the effects on the focal points and i agree as well that I shouldn't always do that.

Thanks for the comments and suggestions everyone.