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Post by Aussie on Nov 3, 2007 18:27:26 GMT -5
 I dont think it worked... but comments appriciated anyway ;D |
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Post by gray929 on Nov 3, 2007 18:32:01 GMT -5
Not bad. To me, it looks like two conflicting styles. You have abstract and then a paint effect in the BG. I'd hate to say this, but I'd start over again, keeping it strictly abstract. The loops you did on the right are very professional and well done. Look at some abstract pieces on dA and take note on how all the components flow together. Then, combine all your knowledge towards a new piece. Don't think you failed at this style. Cuz you didn't  |
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Post by .Phoenix on Nov 3, 2007 18:44:53 GMT -5
It's alright...Doesn't really have a good focal, too the right of the sig it's perfect but moving left it gets worse. Those two lines are just a bit too random imo. Work on your colors and concept.
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Post by Stinky666 on Nov 3, 2007 18:47:16 GMT -5
A bit too simple for me.
Just a little smudge with a render xD
Unless of course, you actually made the C4D too ?
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Post by Aussie on Nov 3, 2007 18:48:08 GMT -5
Thank You.
I'll probs start over yeah...
Anymore suggestions?
Edit: no unfortunately i didnt make the c4d... i wish lol
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Post by gray929 on Nov 3, 2007 18:51:38 GMT -5
Edit: no unfortunately i didnt make the c4d... i wish lol O, well, um, good placement of it! |
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